I like your work mannat. It reminds me of the bird at my house chirping and the dogs barking in the neighborhood . Maybe you could use more information about your poem.
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I like your work mannat. It reminds me of the bird at my house chirping and the dogs barking in the neighborhood . Maybe you could use more information about your poem.
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